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Thursday, October 7, 2010

'Running Around (and Such)' by Linda Byler

Genre: Amish Fiction

About: (From FSB Associates)
Lizzie Glick longs to fit into her quiet Amish community. Her sisters, Emma and Mandy, are ready to get married and settle into the traditional rhythm of having children and keeping house. But Lizzie isn't sure that's what she wants for her future. It isn't that Lizzie doesn't want to stay Amish.

Why I wanted to read this book:

  • It's no secret that I love books that feature the Amish way of life, so when I was offered the chance to read Amish fiction written by an ACTUAL Amish woman I immediately said yes!
What worked for me:
  •  The promise of a great story about a strong-willed young girl who wonders if being Amish is what she wants out of life.

What didn't work for me:
  • Pretty much everything...the story was boring and very unimaginative.
  • The author used the technique of flashback wayy tooo much!!! 
  • The story never really progressed. I felt like I had read forever,but I didn't go anywhere! 
  •  Lizzie obsessed over being heavier than her sisters and the reader had to hear about her obsession in every single chapter.
  •  I just felt that there was no depth to this book. Maybe I'm unfairly comparing this one to other Amish fiction that I've read and for that I apologize.
Recommend? Unfortunately I would not recommend this book to friends. I barely made it through this one and it felt like a chore instead of an escape into the Amish world.

My Rating: 2/5

Because of my low rating I feel the need to post links from other blogger's who read this one and enjoyed it. Please visit this site so that you get a balanced look at this novel.
Cindy's Love of Books

SourceJulie of FSB Associates
Lizzie Searches for Love, Book 1
By Linda Byler
Published by Good Books
May 2010;$13.99US; 978-1-56148-688-5

 
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Wednesday, September 22, 2010

'Shoulder Bags and Shootings' by Dorothy Howell

Author: Dorothy Howell

Genre:  Mystery

About: Hailey is a young woman who is obsessed with owning the newest designer hand bags. Along the way of acquiring these handbags she finds herself implicated in a murder. While tracking down the must-have bag, she inadvertently solves the crime.

Descriptive Words: fashion obsessed, ditzy,

Thoughts: I had no expectations when I accepted a review copy of this book. I thought the story sounded cute and I do like a good mystery. Well, I have to say that this one just did not make the grade. I thought Haily was a bit of a spoiled brat. She basically showed up for work when she wanted and just wasn't someone I warmed up to. I'm sure a lot of it has to do with the fact that I myself can not understand the need to have a designer bag that costs thousands of dollars. I felt she was absolutely clueless as to what matters in the world and just couldn't buy into the whole, I work retail yet I can still buy these big dollar bags and oh yeah, along the way I solve crimes storyline


Source: FSB Associates

Recommend? I truly hesitate to recommend this one to my friends. If this remotely sounds like a book you would to read I would tell you to start at the beginning of the series with Handbags and Homicide. I honestly feel that I needed to begin there to get the background on Hailey and maybe I would have been able to like her.

Rating: 2.5/5



Thank you to Caitlin for sending me this copy for review. I was not compensated for my review. My thoughts on this book were in no way influenced by the author. They are my personal reflections based solely on MY experience while reading this novel.





Review style courtesy of Lynne's Book Reviews

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Tuesday, September 14, 2010

'The Marshall Plan for Writing- reviewed by Janel of Janel's Jumble- a writer

Author: Evan Marshall and Martha Jewett
Published: 2010, ebook
Genre: How-to
Source: FSB Associates/Anna Suknov
Synopsis from FSB:
  The Marshall Plan® -- a structured approach to writing fiction and narrative nonfiction.
Combining more than 60 years of experience as authors, editors and literary agents, Evan and Martha created innovative resources for writers that break down each writing project into its core components, making the writing process manageable. They also provide refinements which include tightly focused topics, highly differentiated formats, and the skillful use of narrative fiction techniques and narrative nonfiction writing modes.
So, you have decided to write a novel, maybe even participate in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month). What do you do now? If you are new to the novel writing process you most likely have a lot of questions on where to start and what to do. The Marshall Plan ® for Novel Writing is a 16-step process that can take you from the idea to a completed manuscript in 30 days or less.
The plan addresses the technical and creative aspects of writing a novel. First, you need to figure out what kind of genre you will most likely succeed in. Then you need to decide how long the novel will be. Armed with this information and a list of characters, the process then breaks the novel into the appropriate number of sections, basically action units.
Depending on the length of the intended novel, the plan recommends anywhere from 40 to 120 sections. When using The Marshall Plan ® Software producing these sections is literally a fill in the blank process. The software contains all of the sheets detailed in the book, from character backgrounds to section sheets. The software also has instructions and advice on things to consider as you work on the programs tabs, basically a condensed version of the topic covered in the e-book. After you have gone through the plan and filled out the appropriate number of section sheets you will have a detailed plot outline to write your novel.
As a short story writer I have to admit I am intimidated by the process of writing a novel. Keeping track of plot twists, subplots and a cast of characters for over 50,000 words is a task I am honestly afraid to tackle. Do I think this plan will work? Yes. Do I think it is for everyone? No.
The author has had many years of experience in the publishing industry. He knows what “works” in novels and used that knowledge to formulate this book and software. If you want to write a novel, that has a good chance of being published, I think following the guidelines in the plan will give you a nice advantage. After all of the sections are completed a very detailed outline is produced. Plotting out all of the twists and subplots will definitely speed up the writing process for beginning and experienced writers. The outline should also navigate around the dreaded writer’s block since you will know exactly what your characters need to do and where your plot and subplots are going.
If you are the type of writer that likes to sit down, start writing and see where you go, the detailed outlining prescribed by this plan may not appeal to you. Of course, you can use your wandering mind in the planning process and the advantage is that you will know when a subplot or scene isn’t working before you waste hours and words writing it. Also, I think the worksheets are useful for any writer. If plotting by the seat of your pants isn’t working well, I don’t think it can hurt to try planning and pre-plotting. If you are serious about writing a novel, but don’t know where to start, The Marshall Plan® may be the push you need by taking some of the mystery out of the process.



** Thank you so much for reviewing this Janel. You're input has been invaluable.

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

'The Lumby Lines' - Gail Fraser

Synopsis from back cover: Nestled in the Northwest is a quaint little town that its quirky residents are proud to call home. With charming shops lining its one main thoroughfare, Lumby has the oldest apple tree in the county and the smallest bank in the state. And though it's hours from the nearest big city, you'll always find Lumby close to your heart.....

1. Words to describe the book: comfortable, funny, touching, quirky

2. Location or characters you met:

  • The town of Lumby: I want to live there!! The description of Lumby and the front cover just makes me want to be there. This town is alive and a vibrant character in this story.
  • Mark and Pam Walker : They're a couple who has it all and risk it for their dream life. I liked them both immensely and could see myself being friends with them.
  • The monks: I liked their simplistic way of life and how they worked together to save their monastery.
  • Supporting characters: You have your strange, eccentric, busybodies, good-hearted, and a few mean-spirited residents. They each added their own little bit of flavor!
3. Things you liked/disliked:
  • Excerpts from The Lumby Lines newspaper- these cracked me up!!
  • Hank- the plastic flamingo. I'm a fan of Hank's...I swear he's real!!
  • Cast of characters truly makes this book. 
  • The author's husband artwork graces this book. I really love it.
  • The writing resonated with me and for a few hours I was able to escape to another place.
  • That I have four more books to read in this series!!! #2- Stealing Lumby, #3- Lumby's Bounty, #4- The Promise of Lumby, and the most current release #5- Lumby On the Air.
4. Rating:  4/5 



To keep up with what's new in the world of Lumby you can read the Simply Lumby Newsletter.  Gail often does giveaways and includes yummy recipes.  Currently she is featuring a delicious recipe called Lazy Goose Panini #3 which is great to cook on the grill this summer.






Thank you to Caitlin of FSB Associates for sending me a review copy. I was not compensated for my review.
My thoughts on this book were in no way influenced by the author or publicist.
They are my personal reflections based solely on MY experience while reading this novel.




Published: Paperback May, 2007
Publisher:  New American Library
Pages: 319
Genre:  Fiction
ISBN: 9780451221391

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Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Review: The Power of Half by Kevin and Hannah Salwen


Title: The Power of Half: One Family's Decision to Stop Taking and Start Giving Back
Author: Kevin and Hannah Salwen
Pages: 242
Genre: Non-Fiction/ Personal Growth
Source: FSB Associates
Who Recommended Book to Me: Caitlin Price - FSB Senior Publicist (thanks Caitlin!)


Synopsis:
Written in tandem by the father-daughter team of Kevin and Hallah Salwen, The Power of Half is the story of one family's life-altering decision and its unexpected results. The Salwens hoped that selling their home would allow them to make things better in a small corner of the world. Little did they expect how much they would gain themselves.


What I didn't like in this book:


  • I know that it wasn't meant to be construed this way, but I didn't really see how going from a 6,500 sq. ft. home to 3250 sq.ft. was such a hardship. Is this the average size of a home in America??? When you write a book like this it leaves you open to criticism and people questioning your reasons and commitment. So I guess that is what I'm doing here in this comment.
  • They were financially able to keep two houses running in regards to a monthly mortgage and upkeep. I applaud that they moved to a smaller house, but honestly where was the "risk" that others will experience if they actually were to do something like this? Again, I didn't feel that by halving the size of their home was a big enough adjustment.....remember, this is my opinion. 

  • How many people in America have the financial resources that this family has? Yes, I know they worked hard for it and I respect them for that. I am just saying that when they ventured into this idea of half they really didn't have to worry about losing anything. I'm afraid with these economic times some people may only see how MUCH they still had even after giving away half, instead of focusing on their idea of helping others.

  • When Kevin mentions a bag, it is an Eddie Bauer bag. When he mentions a shirt it is a Nike Golf shirt....honestly, he should have left the labels out of the description. Why were they included?? I thought the idea of this book was to INCLUDE as many people as possible in this venture and to make them feel as if they too could do something like this. Was it to remind others that he could still afford to buy the nicer things in life, even while giving up a million dollar house?????????????????

Now on to the positive side of things!!! What I did like about this book:

  • Hannah! She is a young lady with a vision and with the guidance of her parents was able to start out with an idea and see it become an actual plan that she could contribute to!

  • Hannah's essays which are included in each chapter. I loved her ideas and the activities she included at the end for ideas to jump start your own plans.


  • Self-reliance is the key to helping others, not handouts!!!!

  • Community- doing this project together as a family brought a sense of well-being to their home. It also showed the children how to bring it to a group of people.

My Final Thoughts:
This was a good book with a lot of great ideas and of course, some criticism from me. None of the criticisms are aimed at the children!! Only to Kevin. I appreciate that he does acknowledge how blessed his family is and I don't feel like he was trying to be uppity about his portfolio and equity, but at times it just seemed to rub me the wrong way. I applaud this family for putting this small seed of an idea into motion and with all of their hard work seeing it blossom into a Giving Tree!!! I found myself being inspired by Hannah and will be keeping my copy to read again and to see how my family may be able to incorporate some ideas from the  Power of Half lifestyle, especially in terms of service and giving to others.

$1 of each copy sold will be donated 
to Rebuilding Together, serving America's
low-income home-owners and providing
critical repairs at no charge to those with the greatest need. 
For more information, visit Rebuilding Together.



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